Haiku 13 1/2

17 February 05

Got to fooling around on Poetry.com and entered a haiku contest. I found myself a little put off by the formal cadence requirement at first, but the effort to capture the feel of the original came out well enough.

torn and tattered clouds,
a white mountain`s lofty peak.
the wind`s shadowed moods!


Original

white mountain,
   torn and tattered clouds.
     wind shadow moods!


Rick Silletti

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